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Sunday, June 28, 2009

Awesome Alliteration from Room 15's Amazing Authors

This term we have been focusing on descriptive writing and in particular using adjectives and adverbs. Read on to see how we have used adjectives and adverbs in our fun alliterations.


Matthew H wrote -

  • mean monkeys making mochaccinos
  • flat fish floating freakily
  • super speedy shape shifters shading shadows


Reid wrote -

  • lions lying lazily
  • slimy sharks slithering slowly


Quinn wrote -

  • Manoeuvring monkeys making mucky mud balls
  • whacky wekas wailing at wobbly wombats
  • ducking ducks diving deep


Caitlin wrote -

  • pink panthers pouncing


Shaelyn wrote -


  • dotted dogs doing dances
  • whacky wolves wearing white wetsuits


Ethan wrote -

  • cheetahs chasing cheeky chickens


Brooke wrote -

  • dazzling dogs dancing dangerously


Rebecca wrote -

  • red rabbits resting when it's raining
  • slippery snakes snapping sourly
  • pouncing pelicans playing games


Ruvimbo wrote -

  • skating snakes snacking on sausages
  • horses hiding away from bulls huge horns



Lisa wrote -

  • Tigger the tiger training tiredly
  • giggling giraffes playing golf




Blake wrote -

  • whacky whales wobbling through the water


Keedon wrote -

  • crazy crocodile cracked up cheering cheetah




Joshua wrote -

  • beautiful butterflies basking


James wrote -

  • Zipping zebras zooming to Zurich
  • tremendous trees touching the top


Ella wrote -

  • furious forests fuming
  • hopping horses having headaches
  • happy hills having hotdogs


Grace C wrote -

  • wild werewolves wailing at the wall
  • furious frogs fighting fearlessly

Zac wrote -

  • tedious tigers trotting toward terrified turtles

  • hairless hippos hungrily whoofing down herbs

Tara wrote -
  • unique unicorns unicycling unbelievably
  • soggy seahorses sitting self - consciously
  • beautiful boats billowing on a balmy beach
  • crimson cats cutting cookies cautiously
Grace H
  • leopard leaping on lemmings
  • brown bears bellowing
  • salty seals sliding seaward
  • sticky slimy snake slithering silently
  • gazelles gliding gracefully
  • curious crocodiles chomping chocolate







1 comment:

  1. I love your alliteration Room 15, they really got my tongue in knots!
    Isn't blogging great fun? Room 10 love being able to show off their work to friends and family and now you will be able to as well!

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