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Sunday, March 7, 2010

Writing

Here are some snippets from our Summertime writing. The full versions are on our wall in class.

In summertime I hear the bowler shouting "How's that!" like the eagles singing in the summer wind... Dillon

I went to Bali and went to an elephant park and rode an elephant... Ushil

Summer time is the best time of the year because I get to ride my motor bike up and down steep and bumpy hills... Matty

We're almost at the beach,not far.
Seagull swooping up ahead
We're here!.. Kathleen

Jandals flicking sand everywhere, cousins fighting over a water gun... Saij

On a boat my line twitched then all of a sudden my line is going off into the water, taking it on a frightening ride... Josh

Eating yummy ice blocks at the Four Square... Jyden

Boogie boarding at the beach
Getting dunked and laughing heaps!.. Bella

In summer you body surf the waves
Stopping at the shop for a chocolate, crunch, creamy ice-cream...Kaid

Playing soccer in the burning warm sun... Finn D

The sunshine is beautiful, it heats up the blue warm sea... Hanna

Everyone is lazy and we like to have a fan to cool us down... Meghan

Lounging in a hammock for nine hours... Finn L


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